Thursday, March 22, 2018

Writing Marathon #SOL18 March 22

Wind whistles through trees
Dogs barking down the hill
Voices chatter by the wall
Children writing all around

Laughter floats
Trucks rumble
Hair rises
Children write

Sun shining through white clouds
Water flows from melting islands
Nasty smells nearby swirl
Children writing all around

Tires squeak
Keys rattle
Rocks tumble

Children write

7 comments:

  1. Neat poem! I'm trying to figure out if your class went outside or had a window open? So much inferencing potential!!

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  2. Beautiful poem :)

    Children write while everything around them.

    Wendy, did you write this poem while the children were writing?

    Best.

    Purviben
    @TrivediZiemba

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  3. In this poem, you’re noticing the world around you just as your students are hopefully writing about it. Neat poem!

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  4. Great word picture of the setting, but the real picture was those flying pencils and bent heads.

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  5. You use words with such precision. Beautiful!

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